摘要：為大家分享前考官simon演示的9分雅思小作文。考官親筆，用最正統(tǒng)的4段式寫作，本文主題-柱狀圖:奧運獎牌，共178詞?？嘤谛∽魑牡目绝唫?，可以好好研讀模仿。

相比較大作文，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上與市面上的小作文資料相對較少，質(zhì)量上乘的就更少，而天下烤鴨，苦小作文久矣，迫切需要圖表類范文的指導(dǎo)，所以，請看本文前考官同學(xué)的精彩演繹。柱狀圖：奧運獎牌，共178詞，band 9.

話題：The chart below shows the total number of Olympic medals won by twelve different countries.

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滿分范文：

The bar chart compares twelve countries in terms of the overall number of medals that they have won at the Olympic Games.

It is clear that the USA is by far the most successful Olympic medal winning nation. It is also noticeable that the figures for gold, silver and bronze medals won by any particular country tend to be fairly similar.

The USA has won a total of around 2,300 Olympic medals, including approximately 900 gold medals, 750 silver and 650 bronze. In second place on the all-time medals chart is the Soviet Union, with just over 1,000 medals. Again, the number of gold medals won by this country is slightly higher than the number of silver or bronze medals.

Only four other countries - the UK, France, Germany and Italy - have won more than 500 Olympic medals, all with similar proportions of each medal colour. Apart from the USA and the Soviet Union, China is the only other country with a noticeably higher proportion of gold medals (about 200) compared to silver and bronze (about 100 each).

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