劍13 真題 par3

What is the impact on society if people have a poor life –work balance

依然是層次+句型

par3的問題回答需要分層展開，其實(shí)par1 也是如此，只是par1 的問題更偏日常生存場(chǎng)景，，

所以par3口語我是讓我的學(xué)生是跟著大作文一起按分類話題準(zhǔn)備的，因?yàn)樾枰掝}性詞伙。

第一句 總，同義替換題目，不要原文重現(xiàn)

undoubtedly ,it is true that if people could not balance well between their personal life and work ,it may have negative impact not only on themselves but also on the society .

? 分層:-medical service? 挑戰(zhàn)

??????? -crime rate 上升

?????? -population structure?? 影響勞動(dòng)力

As for the society ,if a large number of people behave poorly on this subject , there will be an increasing number of unhealthy people, which will pose heavy burden /be a challenge for local hospitals .

Meanwhile 銜接詞 , they may also suffer from mental problems especially in metropolises ,resulting in the likelihood of increase of the crime rate .

這一段可以不要，Moreover,銜接詞， in terms of the structure of population , the unbalance symbolizes the serious competition in this place, which means only young people could survive in the city instead of the old . As long as the young people come to the age when they want to settle down ,they would choose to leave this city ,accounting for the problem of the labor shortage? .