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A rubric score 5 essay:?

Effectively addresses the topic and task;?

Is well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations，exemplifications, and/or details;?

Displays unity, progression, and coherence;?

Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors.

文章切題；

闡說(shuō)充分，文章有說(shuō)服力;

段落組織有序；

銜接緊密，過(guò)渡自然，有很強(qiáng)的邏輯性;

段落內(nèi)句與句連接順暢，句式使用恰當(dāng)，靈活，嫻熟;

用詞確切，得體。

文章中有個(gè)別語(yǔ)法拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，但不影響內(nèi)容表達(dá)。

總結(jié)一下，就是：

?內(nèi)容充實(shí)，有理有據(jù)

?分段合理，邏輯連貫

?句式多變，用詞恰當(dāng)