雅思口語(yǔ)官網(wǎng)6分
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考生6分原因
1流利,秒回
2 簡(jiǎn)單句+復(fù)雜句,沒(méi)有明顯頻繁的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
3 發(fā)音清晰
為何只有6分
沒(méi)有內(nèi)容,通常1-2句話就回答了par3的問(wèn)題
沒(méi)有內(nèi)容自然談不上回答的層次,也談不上展開(kāi)/論證充分
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啟示:
達(dá)到6分的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)后,從層次上展開(kāi),以句型充實(shí)層次,并帶具體的例子論證
下面是我建議的回答
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?What are the advantages of reading about a country before you visit it ?
考生回答,culture ,local culture,rules
我的建議:
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總,同義替換問(wèn)題,給一個(gè)總的回答
?There are some benefits to get to know one country before visiting it .
P2 就benefits 分層展開(kāi)來(lái)談,分2 層,中間用銜接詞
1One is that in terms of the effectiveness of travelling , having some knowledge of the culture of the destination will offer you better access to understand their local culture ,thus ,enriching your whole travelling experience
2 For example , I am really a world wide traveler ,and travelling for me does not only mean? site seeing ,but also more at the cultural exploration part. So ,everywhere I go ,I will dig out the history as much as I can before I land in that place . Before I went to UK , I did review different prestigious novels about UK ,such as jane, the comedies of 莎士比亞 and when I travelled there ,I could combine what I learnt from books with what I saw practically.
?3,Besides ,traveling in a new place accompanies danger and risk, that is why it is suggested that you had better do some research before arriving.
4 Before I went to morocco ,I learnt from the internet that solo female traveler need to pay special attention and later it turned out to be true . Without researching first ,I would be likely to get into trouble
?P3 總,回應(yīng)問(wèn)題 So it is important to get to ……
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?Do you think most people do this before they visit the place?
Well ,I don’t think most people do that ,it is case by case ,different people have different preference towards whether or not prefer for their trips .
For those who pay attention to cultural exploration as I mentioned ,they will do ,like I will do .
However ,for those who travel with groups instead of travelling alone ,it is not necessary for them to do as/since ?the agency has already arranged everything in order for them
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Are there any disadvantages of doing that ?
實(shí)事求是的回答
Well ,for me ,I dont not see any drawbacks of doing so ,except that you need to spend some time studying first .
And the fact is that if you don’t do so ,you will be likely to take some risks ,such as the culture shock or some real danger if you are in a place where stealing is popular .
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Some people choose to go with a guide to unfamiliar place,? ,do you think it will improve the quality of the experience?
Well ,it still depends on the style of your traveling
If you are used to go with others or guides ,yes ,having someone lead you will be more comfortable for you .from this point of view ,yes ,it will improve your experience of travelling especially if you visit come historical sites. Having some guide explaining to you on the way will impress you in a better way .
However, for some adventurists like me ,I would prefer to explore by myself ,and the unexpected is what I look for in my trips as I always welcome unknown things .
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So it is important to travel independently or to go with a guide??
To most people ,do they prefer to …or ….
When you travel in familiar site ,do you think it is more important to visit sights or meet local people?
well ,I am traveler who prefers to do cultural travelling ,and connecting with local people matters more to me compared to seeing the nature views .
I did spend 3 years going through the whole American continent ,I did go through numerous wonderful sceneries .but what left deepest impression is still the story which happened between me and locals, among which the most unforgettable is the story when I was in peru ,living with an indigenous family ….
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The government should protect local historical? ?
Yes
分層展開(kāi)
就歷史遺跡的功能而言 ?
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就實(shí)際收入而言
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