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Synopsis（概要）：

An Aurora Chapter strike force is sent to retake an Industrial World that has been instigated by a Word-Bearer Warband. Firstborn Marine Erilis and Primaris Marine Dorren?are assigned together to the strike force. Although they are good commanders of the chapter’s mighty battle tanks, they have different ideas about the Chapter’s vehicles: Erilis thinks that each battle tank represents the history of the chapter as Dreadnoughts, But Dorren?just treats them as tools and weapons which can win the war. However, they still have duties with them except arguing with each other’s viewpoints: defeating traitors and their followers that already armed teeth by world’s stock.

一支曙光女神戰(zhàn)團的打擊部隊被派去奪回一個在懷言者戰(zhàn)幫煽動下叛亂的工業(yè)世界。長子星際戰(zhàn)士艾瑞利斯和原鑄星際戰(zhàn)士多瑞恩都在這支部隊當中作戰(zhàn)，雖然他們都是戰(zhàn)團強大的戰(zhàn)斗坦克的指揮官，但他們對戰(zhàn)團載具的態(tài)度卻是天差地別：艾瑞利斯認為每一輛戰(zhàn)斗坦克都和無畏一樣是戰(zhàn)團歷史的標志；而多瑞恩只把它們當成贏得戰(zhàn)爭勝利的工具和武器。然而除了就彼此的觀點展開爭論外，他們依然有使命在身：擊敗叛徒和他們通過世界庫存武裝到牙齒的追隨者。

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“他們正在靠近，但愿你已經(jīng)想好了你的作戰(zhàn)計劃‘考爾的杰作’?！?/p>

艾瑞利斯有意加重了后半句話的發(fā)音，讓那個有些侮辱性的外號聽起來更加刺耳了。

“那個家伙在挑釁我，”多瑞恩想到，“他希望通過這種舉動讓我犯錯，蒙羞，從而證明他要比我更強?！?/p>

他沒有回應艾瑞利斯的挑釁，只是操控著車輛繼續(xù)沿著道路向前駛?cè)??！盎锫N”號巨大的身軀推開了燒得漆黑的車輛殘骸，它來到了一座工坊建筑旁邊打開了艙門，讓仲裁者小隊趕緊去尋找這座工業(yè)園區(qū)的控制中心。

多瑞恩有理由相信艾瑞利斯和他的“奧特拉瑪?shù)尿湴痢碧栆苍谧龊退粯拥牟渴?，蘭德襲擊者一定也和他一樣找地方卸下了致命的乘客去執(zhí)行他們的任務，并準備和即將到來的叛軍交火。

隨著鳥卜儀發(fā)出了刺耳的警告聲，多瑞恩明白他們的獵物已經(jīng)來了。

叛徒出動了兩個連的黎曼魯斯坦克和少量的步兵來對付他們，他們的指揮官可能過度迷信了數(shù)字的力量：工業(yè)園區(qū)狹窄的通道并不適合大量部署裝甲部隊，如果他們覺得十八輛黎曼魯斯就能摧毀一輛蘭德襲擊者和一輛反擊者處決者的話，他們就大錯特錯了。

多瑞恩從顯示屏上看到了他的目標，其中一個中隊排成了一列行駛在道路上，它們的武器緊張的指向了道路兩側(cè)。“不錯的戰(zhàn)術(shù)素質(zhì)，”多瑞恩在心里評價道，“但戰(zhàn)場上要掌握的遠不止理論知識那么簡單?！?/p>

“基里曼之錘”號在一個岔路口的建筑后面等待著它的獵物，它的重型激光毀滅者已經(jīng)充能完畢，就等敵人上鉤了。

當反擊者處決者從那座工坊后面鉆出來的時候，那三輛黎曼魯斯甚至沒來得及調(diào)轉(zhuǎn)它們的炮塔。

熾烈的激光束從炮管內(nèi)射出將三輛坦克打了個對穿，盡管黎曼魯斯的正面裝甲是最堅固的，但這不代表它也能擋住一發(fā)能熔化泰坦裝甲的攻擊。

“三輛?！倍嗳鸲髟谛睦镉浿鴶?shù)，然后操控著戰(zhàn)車轉(zhuǎn)向去尋找其他的敵人。

他的鳥卜儀讀取到了另外一個中隊的信號，但它們的符文標記很快就消失在了屏幕上，與之一起發(fā)生的是另一個出現(xiàn)在它們位置的友軍符文標記，一個多瑞恩再熟悉不過的標記。

“我還以為你們在火星睡覺的時候能多學點東西呢，這是我干掉的第二支中隊，別落后太多哦?！?/p>

“我們來比試一場吧，原鑄，看誰能取得更多的擊殺，倘若你贏了，我會就之前的態(tài)度向你道歉，可如果你輸了...”

“希望你能學會尊重戰(zhàn)團的傳統(tǒng)，而不是拿傲慢的考爾思維去玷污它?！?/p>

說到這里，艾瑞利斯的語氣也變得嚴肅了起來。

“那就試試看吧。”多瑞恩回答道。

兩輛鋼鐵巨獸再一次分開去尋找各自的目標。

"They're approaching. I hope you've got your battle plan 'Cawl's Masterpiece.'"

Erilis accentuated the latter part of the sentence, making the somewhat insulting nickname even harsher.

"That fellow is provoking me," thought Dorren. "By doing so, he hopes to make me wrong and dishonour, and prove that he is better than me."

He did not respond to Erilis's defiance but steered the vehicle along the road. The massive body of Repulsor Executioner?Guilliman's Hammer?pushed through the blackened wreckage of the vehicle. It reached a workshop building and opened the hatch, sending an intercessor squad getting off the vehicle to find the industrial complex's control centre.

Dorren has reason to believe that Erilis and his vehicle?Pride of Ultramar?were doing the same, the land raider must have found a place to unload its deadly passengers to carry out their mission and prepare for a firefight with the incoming rebels.

With the shrill warning of the auspex, Dorren knows that their prey is coming.

Two companies of Leman Russ tanks with supporter infantries are deployed against them. Their commanders may have been overly convinced of the power of numbers: the narrow corridors of the industrial park are not suitable for the deployment of large numbers of armour squadrons, and if they think that eighteen Leman Russ could destroy a Land Raider and a Repulsor Executioner, they make a big mistake.

Dorren finds his target on the screen. One of the squadrons is lined up on the road, their weapons pointing nervously to the sides. "Good tactical qualities," Dorren mentally commented, "but there's more to the battlefield than theory."

The Guilliman's Hammer waits for its prey behind a building at a fork in the road, its heavy laser destroyers already fully charged, waiting for the enemy to bite.

The three Leman Russ tanks just have time to turn their turrets when the Repulsor Executioner emerged from behind the workshop.

The blazing laser beam from the barrel pierced the three tanks. Although Leman Russ's frontal armour provides the best protection for it, it doesn't mean that it is able to block a single shot that would melt a Titan's armour.

"Three." Dorren made a mental note of the number, then steers his vehicle away in search of other enemies.

His aspuex picks up another squadron's signal, but their rune mark soon disappears from the screen, along with another ally rune mark in their place, one that Dorren knows all too well.

"I thought you'd learn more while you slept on Mars. This is the second squadron I've killed. Don't fall too far behind."

"Let's have a contest, Primaris, to see who can score more kills. If you win, I'll apologize for my attitude, but if you lose..."

"Let's hope you learn to respect the chapter's tradition, rather than tarnish it with arrogant Cawl thinking."

Here,Erilis's tone turns serious.

"Try it, then." "Dorren replied.

Once again, the two steel beasts split up in search of their respective targets.

一些訣竅和竅門：

如果你實在是個英語苦手，那么可以考慮用機翻軟件來幫忙寫作。

首先把所有的人名和GW語用單獨的大寫字母代替，然后寫文（最好是一句話而不是一整段，不然翻譯軟件會開始抽風），在校對完成后再把人名和GW術(shù)語放進去即可。

當然記得字數(shù)，概要部分100詞，摘要500詞，最好是寫個戰(zhàn)斗場景+人物對話即可。